Writing. U1. Ex.6.

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Dear Principal,

I am writing to give you some comments about the coming concert.

Firstly, I see some practical problems. The rehearsals will be held between 10-14th June, so I wonder if 5 days wouldn't be enough to practice and rehearse.

Also I feel that the prices are too expensive and the discount for student and children is too small. Probably some people will not attend the concert at all. So I think that you may reduce the prices and find other ways to raise money, for example: selling souvenirs, getting an all-prize lottery, making the drinks’ prices more expensive and etc.

Secondly, I wonder why you put the form only for musicians. What about the dancers? How could they fill your form as it doesn't have appropriate columns?

And what about the “Level achieved” column? How can people measure their level of performance?

Finally, did you think that the first half of the concert will be boring if it would consist only of classical music and dances? It may be better if classical music takes turns with modern music and dances.

I’m sure that my comments can make the concert more attractive to come and enjoy.

I look forward to receiving your answers.

Sincerely yours,

Vyacheslav Kazakov

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Dear Principal,

I am writing to give you some comments about the forthcoming concert.

Firstly, I see some practical problems. The rehearsals will be held between 10-14th June, so I wonder if 5 days are enough to practice and rehearse.

Also I feel that the prices are too high and the discount for student and children is too small. Probably some people will not attend the concert at all. So I think that you may reduce the prices and find other ways to raise the money, for example, by selling souvenirs, getting an all-prize lottery, making the drinks’ prices more expensive etc.

Secondly, I wonder why you put the form only for musicians. What about the dancers? How could they fill in the form when it doesn't have appropriate columns?

And what about the “Level achieved” column? How can people measure their level of performance?

Finally, did you think that the first half of the concert would be boring if it only consists of classical music and dances? It may be better if classical music takes turns with modern music and dances.

I’m sure that my comments will help the concert to attract more public.

I look forward to receiving your answers.

Sincerely yours,

Vyacheslav Kazakov