CAE. Proposal p.5
Дата публикации: Mar 19, 2017 12:6:25 PM
You see this announcement in your local paper:
Let's make next year's drama festival an even bigger success!
We want to attract people of all ages to our drama festival next summer, and we want your help. Send us your proposals for what kind of drama and theatrical events we should include in order to attract people of different ages, and what extra facilities the town might need to provide. Make suggestions for dealing with transport and accommodation issues.
1.
Responding to your invitation, I would like to suggest some methods to achieve much success of the next drama festival by engaging more people in its activities.
I believe wholeheartedly that it is crucial to stratify particular drama events so that they would be attractive to different parts of audience because people can experience polar emotions when they are watching a play. For instance, younger spectators would not find themselves in the characters who cope with the middle-aged crisis. Thus, you should provide several separated sites for performing dramas which would aim at age-based viewer groups. What is more, it would be a brilliant idea to choose diverse locations for these event: theatres, open-air areas, and so on. Some of the performances could be interactive. In this case, not only could onlookers empathise with the characters but also take active part in the play themselves, which surely would be very entertaining and captivating.
As for the town's help, I suppose that, owing to being profitable for the town budget, the festival should be subsidised by the council. For example, the municipality might supply the guests with free-of-charge tickets for the public transport. Besides, if the council decide to benefit hoteliers so that the accommodation prices are lower, it will help attract more participants from other towns.
I consider my proposals to be eligible for attracting more people to the festival due to having a high potential for serving the main purpose - making the next event bright, fascinating and popular.
250
B2
2.
Responding to your invitation, I would like to suggest some methods to achieve much success of the next drama festival by engaging more people in its activities.
I believe wholeheartedly that it is crucial to stratify particular drama events so that they would be attractive to different parts of audience because people can experience polar emotions when they are watching a play. For instance, younger spectators would not find themselves in the characters who cope with the middle-aged crisis. Thus, you should organise several separated sites for performing dramas which would aim at age-based viewer groups. What is more, it would be a brilliant idea to choose diverse locations for these event: theatres, open-air areas, and so on. Some of the performances should be interactive or include quests. In this case, not only could onlookers empathise with the characters but also take active part in the play themselves, which surely would be very entertaining and captivating.
As for the town's help, I suppose that, owing to being profitable for the town budget, the festival should be subsidised by the council. For example, the municipality might provide the guests with free-of-charge tickets for the public transport. Besides, if the council decide to benefit hoteliers so that the accommodation prices are lower, it will help attract more participants from other towns.
I consider my proposals to be eligible for attracting more people to the festival due to having a high potential for serving the main purpose - making the next event bright, fascinating and popular.
253
B2
Correction
Responding to your invitation, I would like to suggest some methods to achieve much success of the next drama festival by engaging more people in its activities.
I believe wholeheartedly that it is crucial to stratify particular drama events so that they would be attractive to heterogeneous audience because people can experience polar emotions when they are watching a play. For instance, younger spectators would not relate to the characters who cope with the middle-aged crisis. Thus, you should organise several separated sites for performing dramas which would aim at age-based viewer groups. What is more, it would be a brilliant idea to choose diverse locations for these events: theatres, open-air areas, and so on. Some of the performances should be interactive or include quests. In this case, not only could onlookers empathise with the characters but also take an active part in the play themselves, which surely would be very entertaining and captivating.
As for the town's help, I suppose that, owing to being profitable for the town budget, the festival should be subsidised by the council. For example, the municipality might provide the guests with free-of-charge tickets for the public transport. Besides, if the council decide to benefit hoteliers so as to reduce the accommodation prices, it will help attract more participants from other towns.
I consider my proposals to be eligible for drawing more people to the festival due to having a high potential for serving the main purpose - making the next event bright, fascinating and popular.
251
B2