IS. Essay p.3. Advertising
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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
advertising noun BrE /ˈædvətaɪzɪŋ/ ; NAmE /ˈædvərtaɪzɪŋ/
advertisement noun BrE /ədˈvɜːtɪsmənt/ ; NAmE /ˌædvərˈtaɪzmənt/
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1.
Nowadays, advertising is all around us. Whether you like it or not, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life.
On the one hand, advertising is a positive part of our lives because we can get the information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing and many people hate it.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
The first reason why I think so is that if there was no advertising neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they wanted to buy.
Advertising connects the former with the latter.
Therefore, it drives trade and economics.
The second reason why I consider advertising to be very important is that almost every social project will survive only with some financial support from the government or independent commercial companies.
Firms can help feed the poor, reconstruct a historical building and buy an exotic animal for a local zoo.
In this case, advertising is a payment for their help.
The final reason I feel advertising to be a positive part of my life is that I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and good-paid job if advertising ceases.
In this case, I couldn't tell employers about myself and they can't tell employees about vacancies because both actions are advertising.
So, the labour-market requires advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising is a very important part of our lives because it drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
I believe that only uneducated and ignorant people could hate advertising because they just don't understand what makes the world go round.
Nowadays, advertising is all around us. Whether you like it or not, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life.
On the one hand, advertising is a positive part of our lives because we can get the information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing and many people hate it.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
The first reason why I think so is that if there was no advertising neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they wanted to buy.
Advertising connects the former with the latter.
Therefore, it drives trade and economics.
The second reason why I consider advertising to be very important is that almost every social project will survive only with some financial support from the government or independent commercial companies.
Firms can help feed the poor, reconstruct a historical building and buy an exotic animal for a local zoo.
In this case, advertising is a payment for their help.
The final reason I feel advertising to be a positive part of my life is that I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and good-paid job if advertising ceases.
In this case, I couldn't tell employers about myself and they can't tell employees about vacancies because both actions are advertising.
So, the labour-market requires advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising is a very important part of our lives because it drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
I believe that only uneducated and ignorant people could hate advertising because they just don't understand what makes the world go round.
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2.
Nowadays, advertising is all around us. It is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life, whether you like it or not.
On the one hand, advertising is a positive part of our lives because we can get the information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing and many people hate it.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
The first reason why I think so is that if there was no advertising neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they want to buy.
Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade.
The second reason why I consider advertising to be very important is that almost every social project will survive only with some financial support from the government or independent commercial companies.
Firms can help feed the poor, reconstruct a historical building and buy an exotic animal for a local zoo.
In this case, advertising is a payment for their help.
The final reason I feel advertising to be a positive part of my life is that I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and good-paid job if advertising ceases.
I couldn't let employers know about me while they couldn't let me and other employees know about their vacancies.
So, the labour-market needs advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising is a very important part of our lives because it drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
I believe that only uneducated and ignorant people could hate advertising because they just don't understand what makes the world go round.
Nowadays, advertising is all around us. It is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life, whether you like it or not.
On the one hand, advertising is a positive part of our lives because we can get the information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing and many people hate it.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
The first reason why I think so is that if there was no advertising neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they want to buy.
Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade.
The second reason why I consider advertising to be very important is that almost every social project will survive only with some financial support from the government or independent commercial companies.
Firms can help feed the poor, reconstruct a historical building and buy an exotic animal for a local zoo.
In this case, advertising is a payment for their help.
The final reason I feel advertising to be a positive part of my life is that I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and good-paid job if advertising ceases.
I couldn't let employers know about me while they couldn't let me and other employees know about their vacancies.
So, the labour-market needs advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising is a very important part of our lives because it drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
I believe that only uneducated and ignorant people could hate advertising because they just don't understand what makes the world go round.
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Final
Nowadays, advertising is all around us. It is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life, whether you like it or not. On the one hand, advertising is a positive part of our lives because we can get the information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free. On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing and many people hate it. As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
The first reason why I think so is that if there was no advertising neither sellers nor customers would know about each other. Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they want to buy. Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade.
The second reason why I consider advertising to be very important is that almost every social project will survive only with some financial support from the government or independent commercial companies. Firms can help feed the poor, reconstruct a historical building and buy an exotic animal for a local zoo. In this case, advertising is a payment for their help.
The final reason I feel advertising to be a positive part of my life is that I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and good-paid job if advertising ceases. I couldn't let employers know about me while they couldn't let me and other employees know about their vacancies. So, the labour-market needs advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising is a very important part of our lives because it drives economics which influences our lives a lot. I believe that only uneducated and ignorant people could hate advertising because they just don't understand what makes the world go round.
2.
Nowadays, advertising is all around us. It is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life, whether you like it or not. On the one hand, advertising is a positive part of our lives because we can get the information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free. On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing and many people hate it. As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
The first reason why I think so is that if there was no advertising ,,,? neither sellers nor customers would know about each other. Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they want to buy. Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade.
The second reason why I consider advertising to be very important is that almost every social project will survive only with some financial support from the government or independent commercial companies. Firms can help feed the poor, reconstruct a historical building and buy an exotic animal for a local zoo. In this case, advertising is a payment for their help.
The final reason I feel advertising to be a positive part of my life is that I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and good-paid job if advertising ceases. I couldn't let employers know about me while they couldn't let me and other employees know about their vacancies. So, the labour-market needs advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising is a very important part of our lives because it drives economics which influences our lives a lot. I believe that only uneducated and ignorant people could hate advertising because they just don't understand what makes the world go round.
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1. Task achievement – 1/3
2. Organization – 2/3 Essay is an academic writing with no smiles or other informal symbols or contracted forms to be used
3. Grammar – 3/3
4. Vocabulary – 3/3 but 'good-paid'
5. Punctuation – 2/2 but “if there was no advertising ,,,? “
Total 11/14
3. correction
Nowadays, advertising is all around us. It is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life, whether you like it or not. On the one hand, advertising is a positive part of our lives because we can get the information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free. On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing and many people hate it. As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics. The first reason why I think so is that if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other. Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they want to buy. Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade. The second reason why I consider advertising to be very important is that almost every social project will survive only with some financial support from the government or independent commercial companies. Firms can help feed the poor, reconstruct a historical building and buy an exotic animal for a local zoo. In this case, advertising is a payment for their help. The final reason I feel advertising to be a positive part of my life is that I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and well-paid job if advertising ceases. I couldn't let employers know about me while they couldn't let me and other employees know about their vacancies. So, the labour-market needs advertising to connect employers with employees. In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising is a very important part of our lives because it drives economics which influences our lives a lot. I believe that only uneducated and ignorant people could hate advertising because they just don't understand what makes the world go round.
Conditionals
if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Neither sellers nor customers would know about each other if there was no advertising.
Academic style
avoid contracted form => *couldn't -> could not
No repeats -> rephrase
Structure:
1. Introductory
2. Positive
3. Negative
4. Conclusion
Better to say - I don't agree with the view (критиковать идеи, а не людей)
Stage II
1.
Nowadays, advertising is everywhere. It seems to be an inevitable part of modern life, whether you like it or not.
On the one hand, advertising is a useful thing because we can get some information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing, and many people hate it.
Indeed, advertising can be terribly annoying as it breaks into a person's personal space with loud sounds and gaudy pictures.
Moreover, it can mislead people about goods and services that are expensive but actually needless or even useless.
Some people even think that someone can use advertising to control over people's dreams and desires.
However, many people consider advertising to be very useful because if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they want to buy.
Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade.
Besides, people can get many services and a lot of information for free if they put up with advertising as a part of what they get.
What's more, as many social projects will survive only with financial support from commercial companies, advertising can be a form of payment for the help of these companies.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
For example, I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and well-paid job if advertising ceases.
I couldn't let employers know about me while they couldn't let me and other employees know about their vacancies.
So, the labour-market needs advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
It makes the world go round.
Nowadays, advertising is everywhere. It seems to be an inevitable part of modern life, whether you like it or not.
On the one hand, advertising is a useful thing because we can get some information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an annoying, a disturbing or even an insulting thing, and many people hate it.
Indeed, advertising can be terribly annoying as it breaks into a person's personal space with loud sounds and gaudy pictures.
Moreover, it can mislead people about goods and services that are expensive but actually needless or even useless.
Some people even think that someone can use advertising to control over people's dreams and desires.
However, many people consider advertising to be very useful because if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Аs a result, sellers couldn't sell their goods while customers couldn't buy what they want to buy.
Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade.
Besides, people can get many services and a lot of information for free if they put up with advertising as a part of what they get.
What's more, as many social projects will survive only with financial support from commercial companies, advertising can be a form of payment for the help of these companies.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
For example, I'm a worker and I won't find an interesting and well-paid job if advertising ceases.
I couldn't let employers know about me while they couldn't let me and other employees know about their vacancies.
So, the labour-market needs advertising to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
It makes the world go round.
319
2.
Nowadays, advertising is everywhere. It seems to be an inevitable part of modern life, whether you like it or not.
On the one hand, advertising is a useful thing because we can get some information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an irritating or even an insulting thing, and many people cannot stand it.
Indeed, advertising can be terribly annoying as it breaks into a person's personal space with loud sounds and gaudy pictures.
Moreover, it can mislead people about goods and services that are expensive but actually needless or even useless.
Some people even think that someone can use advertising to control over people's dreams and desires.
However, many people consider advertising to be very useful because if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Advertising connects the former with the latter, and drives trade.
Besides, people can get many services and a lot of information for free if they put up with advertising as a part of what they get.
What is more, as many social projects will survive only with financial support from commercial companies, advertising can be a form of payment for the help of these companies.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
For example, I am a worker and I will not find an interesting and well-paid job if advertising ceases because the labour-market needs it to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
I can say that it makes the world go round.
Nowadays, advertising is everywhere. It seems to be an inevitable part of modern life, whether you like it or not.
On the one hand, advertising is a useful thing because we can get some information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free.
On the other hand, advertising can be an irritating or even an insulting thing, and many people cannot stand it.
Indeed, advertising can be terribly annoying as it breaks into a person's personal space with loud sounds and gaudy pictures.
Moreover, it can mislead people about goods and services that are expensive but actually needless or even useless.
Some people even think that someone can use advertising to control over people's dreams and desires.
However, many people consider advertising to be very useful because if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other.
Advertising connects the former with the latter, and drives trade.
Besides, people can get many services and a lot of information for free if they put up with advertising as a part of what they get.
What is more, as many social projects will survive only with financial support from commercial companies, advertising can be a form of payment for the help of these companies.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
For example, I am a worker and I will not find an interesting and well-paid job if advertising ceases because the labour-market needs it to connect employers with employees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising drives economics which influences our lives a lot.
I can say that it makes the world go round.
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Final
Nowadays, advertising is everywhere. It seems to be an inevitable part of modern life, whether you like it or not. On the one hand, advertising is a useful thing because we can get some information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free. On the other hand, advertising can be an irritating or even an insulting thing, and many people cannot stand it.
Indeed, advertising can be terribly annoying as it breaks into a person's personal space with loud sounds and gaudy pictures. Moreover, it can mislead people about goods and services that are expensive but actually needless or even useless. Some people even think that someone can use advertising to control over people's dreams and desires.
However, many people consider advertising to be very useful because if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other. Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade. Besides, people can get many services and a lot of information for free if they put up with advertising as a part of what they get. What is more, as many social projects will survive only with financial support from commercial companies, advertising can be a form of payment for the help of these companies.
As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics. For example, I am a worker and I will not find an interesting and well-paid job if advertising ceases because the labour-market needs it to connect employers with employees. In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising drives economics which influences our lives a lot. I can say that it makes the world go round.
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Nowadays, advertising is everywhere. It seems to be an inevitable part of modern life, whether you like it or not. On the one hand, advertising is a useful thing because we can obtain some information about goods and services, watch TV-programs and listen to the radio for free. On the other hand, advertising can be an irritating or even an insulting thing, and many people cannot stand it. As for me, I believe that advertising is an important and necessary part of all markets and, consequently, local and global economics.
Indeed, advertising can be terribly annoying as it breaks into a person's personal space with loud sounds and gaudy pictures. Moreover, it can mislead people about goods and services that are expensive but actually needless or even useless. Some people even think that someone can use advertising to control over people's dreams and desires.
However, many people consider advertising to be very useful because if there was no advertising, neither sellers nor customers would know about each other. Advertising connects the former with the latter and drives trade. For example, I am a worker and I will not find an interesting and well-paid job if advertising ceases because the labour-market needs it to connect employers with employees. Besides, people can get many services and a lot of information for free if they put up with advertising as a part of what they get. What is more, as many social projects will survive only with financial support from commercial companies, advertising can be a form of payment for the help of these companies.
In conclusion, I would like to say that advertising drives economics which influences our lives a lot. I can say that it makes the world go round.
1. Task achievement – 3/3
2. Organization – 2/3
3. Grammar – 3/3
4. Vocabulary – 3/3 but a lot, get; see http://www.ielts-blog.com/category/ielts-preparation-tips/writing-tips/page/2/ formal/informal verbiage
5. Punctuation – 2/2
Total 13/14