IS. Essay p.6. Women in the army?
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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many people think that the army is not for women but others do not agree with them and think that they are women who should decide to join military forces or not.
Traditionally, only men do their military service in Russia.
Women can join the army only as medical or administrative personnel so it is a job for them.
Why do not Russians laws allow women serve for the country?
I believe that this is a matter of equal rights which are not fulfilled in this country.
I think that people incline to the view that women should not be allowed to serve in the army because they consider women as the fair sex.
They believe that women should be protected while they are sitting home, doing only housework and giving birth to children.
In my opinion, this is a very conservative and not politically correct view because it is against the idea of equal rights of all people.
By the way, why must men serve in the army?
I don't think that is the right thing.
On the one hand, this country is not at a great war that demands many men to be involved in.
On the other hand, the military training of this army leaves much to be desired.
Thus, I believe that it is a waste of time for young men who do not cast in their lot with the army.
In conclusion, I would like to say that Russia should have a quite small but very effective and modern-equipped professional army which men and women can join if they are able to serve and pass the entrance examination.
Serving in the army should become a prestigious and highly-paid job.
Many people think that the army is not for women but others do not agree with them and think that they are women who should decide to join military forces or not.
Traditionally, only men do their military service in Russia.
Women can join the army only as medical or administrative personnel so it is a job for them.
Why do not Russians laws allow women serve for the country?
I believe that this is a matter of equal rights which are not fulfilled in this country.
I think that people incline to the view that women should not be allowed to serve in the army because they consider women as the fair sex.
They believe that women should be protected while they are sitting home, doing only housework and giving birth to children.
In my opinion, this is a very conservative and not politically correct view because it is against the idea of equal rights of all people.
By the way, why must men serve in the army?
I don't think that is the right thing.
On the one hand, this country is not at a great war that demands many men to be involved in.
On the other hand, the military training of this army leaves much to be desired.
Thus, I believe that it is a waste of time for young men who do not cast in their lot with the army.
In conclusion, I would like to say that Russia should have a quite small but very effective and modern-equipped professional army which men and women can join if they are able to serve and pass the entrance examination.
Serving in the army should become a prestigious and highly-paid job.
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2. final
Many people think that the army is not for women but others do not agree with them and think that they are women who should decide to join military forces or not. Traditionally, only men do their military service in Russia. Women can join the army only as medical or administrative personnel so it is a job for them. Why do not Russians laws allow women serve for the country? I believe that this is a matter of equal rights which are not fulfilled in this country.
I think that people incline to the view that women should not be allowed to serve in the army because they consider women as the fair sex. They believe that women should be protected while they are sitting home, doing only housework and giving birth to children. In my opinion, this is a very conservative and not politically correct view because it is against the idea of equal rights of all people.
By the way, why must men serve in the army? I do not think that is the right thing. On the one hand, this country is not at a great war that demands many men to be involved in. On the other hand, the military training of this army leaves much to be desired. Thus, I believe that it is a waste of time for young men who do not cast in their lot with the army.
In conclusion, I would like to say that Russia should have a quite small but very effective and modern-equipped professional army which men and women can join if they are able to serve and pass the entrance examination. Serving in the army should become a prestigious and highly-paid job.
leave a lot to be desired - оставляет желать лучшего
Also, leave a great deal or much to be desired
Cliché to be lacking something important; to be inadequate. (A polite way of saying that something is bad.)
to be much worse than you would like (never in continuous tenses)
This report leaves a lot to be desired. I'm sorry to have to fire you, Mary, but your work leaves a lot to be desired.
My tennis game is improving, but my backhand still leaves a lot to be desired.
Apparently, Meg's cooking leaves a lot to be desired.
His account of the election leaves a lot to be desired.
This usage can also be put in a more positive way, that is, leave nothing to be desired, meaning "to be perfectly satisfactory," as in
His account leaves nothing to be desired.
cast in one's lot with - связать свою судьбу
throw in one's lot with
to share in the activities or fortunes of (someone else)
to join with voluntarily and share the fortunes of
cast your lot with somebody/something
to choose to share in whatever happens to another person or a group, to join or side with for better or worse.
If I'm going to cast my lot with this team, I'm going to try to make them as good as possible any way I can.
Etymology: based on the literal meaning of cast your lot (to throw dice or other objects as a way of deciding what will happen)
3. correction
Many people think that the army is not for women but others do not agree with them and think that they are women who should decide to join military forces or not. Traditionally, only men do their military service in Russia. Women can join the army only as medical or administrative personnel ... (http://www.writingwithclarity.com/2013/04/punctuation-challenge-using-commas-before-so/) so it is a job for them. Why do not Russians laws allow women ... serve for the country? I believe that this is a matter of equal rights which are not fulfilled (http://www.multitran.ru/c/m.exe?CL=1&s=%F1%EE%E1%EB%FE%E4%E0%F2%FC+%EF%F0%E0%E2%E0+%F7%E5%EB%EE%E2%E5%EA%E0&l1=1)in this country.
I think that people ... incline (http://www.multitran.ru/c/m.exe?l1=1&l2=2&s=%F1%EA%EB%EE%ED%E5%ED) to the view that women should not be allowed to serve in the army because they consider women as the fair sex. They believe that women should be protected while they are sitting home, doing only housework and giving birth to children. In my opinion, this is a very conservative and not politically correct view because it is against the idea of equal rights of all people.
By the way, why must men serve in the army? I do not think that is the right thing. On the one hand, this country is not at a great war that demands many men to be involved in. On the other hand, the military training of this army leaves much to be desired. Thus, I believe that it is a waste of time for young men who do not cast in their lot with the army.
In conclusion, I would like to say that Russia should have a quite small but very effective and modern-equipped professional army which men and women can join if they are able to serve and pass the entrance examination. Serving in the army should become a prestigious and highly-paid job.
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соблюдать права человека
uphold human rights (The regime has been criticized for failing to uphold human rights)
respect human rights
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Many people think that the army is not for women but others do not agree with them and think that they are women who should decide to join military forces or not. Traditionally, only men do their military service in Russia. Women can join the army only as medical or administrative personnel, so it is a job for them. Why do not Russian laws allow women to serve for the country? I believe that this is a matter of equal rights which are not respected in this country.
I think that people are inclined to the view that women should not be allowed to serve in the army because they consider women as the fair sex. They believe that women should be protected while they are sitting home, doing only housework and giving birth to children. In my opinion, this is a very conservative and not politically correct view because it is against the idea of equal rights of all people.
By the way, why must men serve in the army? I do not think that is the right thing. On the one hand, this country is not at a great war that demands many men to be involved in. On the other hand, the military training of this army leaves much to be desired. Thus, I believe that it is a waste of time for young men who do not cast in their lot with the army.
In conclusion, I would like to say that Russia should have a quite small but very effective and modern-equipped professional army which men and women can join if they are able to serve and pass the entrance examination. Serving in the army should become a prestigious and highly-paid job.