CAE. Essay p.1
Дата публикации: Oct 02, 2016 1:1:51 PM
Methods schools and universities use to help students find suitable jobs:
providing courses and qualifications
work experience programmes
career advice
Some opinions:
We study lots of things which we'll never use in any future job
Without work experience you'd have no isea what to study at university
Some of my teachers can't give me advice because they've never done any jobs other than teaching
1.
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be tought is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference.
Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an interesting and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications giving advantages at job interviews.
While taking these courses, students can decide how they are interested in this or that professional area.
What is more, a lot of courses help develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems.
However, the courses are usually theoretical studies. So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice.
It can be a professional working practice in a commercial company or some kind of practice in the school or the university.
I read in Vladimir Pozner's autobiography about the way he was tought working skills in an american school.
In this school every year students were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity.
For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post. They sold stamps, envelopes and postcards, took and delivered letters and did the books.
Other year pupils sold office supplies, made pottery in the workshop, used the printing press to print invitations, advertisement and so on and so forth.
I believe that this way of practicing is the best to help children choose their way of life and their career.
To sum up I would like to say that it is very important to provide pupils and students with different kinds of professional studies and working practices to help them choose an interesting and well-paid job in the future.
2.
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference.
Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an interesting and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications giving advantages at job interviews.
While taking these courses, students can decide how they are interested in this or that professional area.
What is more, a lot of courses help develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems.
However, the courses are usually theoretical studies.
So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice.
It can be a professional working practice in a commercial company or some kind of practice in the school or the university.
I read in Vladimir Pozner's autobiography about the way he was taught working skills in an American school.
In this school every year students were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity.
For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post.
They sold stamps, envelopes and postcards, took and delivered letters and did the books.
Other pupils sold office supplies, some other made and sold pottery and some other made the school newspaper, etc.
I believe that this way of practicing is the best to help children choose their way of life and their career.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is very important to provide pupils and students with different kinds of professional studies and working practices to help them choose an interesting and well-paid job in the future.
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference.
Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an interesting and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications giving advantages at job interviews.
While taking these courses, students can decide how they are interested in this or that professional area.
What is more, a lot of courses help develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems.
However, the courses are usually theoretical studies.
So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice.
It can be a professional working practice in a commercial company or some kind of practice in the school or the university.
I read in Vladimir Pozner's autobiography about the way he was taught working skills in an American school.
In this school every year students were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity.
For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post.
They sold stamps, envelopes and postcards, took and delivered letters and did the books.
Other pupils sold office supplies, some other made and sold pottery and some other made the school newspaper, etc.
I believe that this way of practicing is the best to help children choose their way of life and their career.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is very important to provide pupils and students with different kinds of professional studies and working practices to help them choose an interesting and well-paid job in the future.
3.
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best one because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference. Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an interesting and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications giving advantages at job interviews. Also, while taking these courses, students can decide how they are interested in this or that professional area. What is more, a lot of courses help develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems. However, the courses are usually theoretical studies. So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice. It can be a professional working practice in a commercial company where they can learn the ropes or some kind of practice in the school or the university. For example, from Vladimir Pozner's autobiography I got to know about the way he had been taught working skills in an American school. In this school every year pupils were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity. For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post office. Other year pupils ran the office supplies shop, some other made and sold pottery and some other were responsible for the school newspaper, etc. During their studying, the pupils practically tried many sorts of working. I believe that this way of practicing is the best one to help children choose their way of life and their career.
o sum up, I would like to say that it is very important to provide pupils and students with professional courses and working practices to help them choose an appropriate job in the future.
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best one because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference. Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an interesting and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications giving advantages at job interviews. Also, while taking these courses, students can decide how they are interested in this or that professional area.What is more, a lot of courses help develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems. However, the courses are usually theoretical studies. So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice. It can be a professional working practice in a commercial company where they can learn the ropes or some kind of practice in the school or the university. For example, from Vladimir Pozner's autobiography I got to know about the way he had been taught working skills in an American school. In this school every year pupils were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity. For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post office. Other year pupils ran the office supplies shop, some other made and sold pottery and some other were responsible for the school newspaper, etc. During their studying, the pupils practically tried many sorts of working. I believe that this way of practicingis the best one to help children choose their way of life and their career.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is very important to provide pupils and students with professional courses and working practices to help them choose an appropriate job in the future.
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Correction
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best one because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference. Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an interesting and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications giving advantages at job interviews. Also, while taking these courses, students can decide how they are interested in this or that professional area. What is more, a lot of courses help develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems. However, the courses are usually theoretical studies. So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice. It can be a professional working practice in a commercial company where they can learn the ropes or some kind of practice in the school or the university. For example, from Vladimir Pozner's autobiography I got to know about the way he had been taught working skills in an American school. In this school every year pupils were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity. For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post office. Other year pupils ran the office supplies shop, some other made and sold pottery and some other were responsible for the school newspaper, etc. During their studying, the pupils practically tried many sorts of working. I believe that this way of practicing is the best one to help children choose their way of life and their career.
o sum up, I would like to say that it is very important to provide pupils and students with professional courses and working practices to help them choose an appropriate job in the future.
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best one because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference. Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an entertaining and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications which will attract potential employers. Also, while taking these courses, students can decide whether they are interested in this or that professional area. What is more, a lot of courses help to develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems. However, the courses are usually theoretical studies. So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice. It can be a professional one in a commercial company where they can learn the ropes or some kind of practice in the school or the university. For example, from Vladimir Pozner's autobiography I got to know about the way he had been taught working skills in an American school. In this school every year pupils were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity. For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post office. Other year pupils ran the office supplies shop, some other made and sold pottery and some other were responsible for the school newspaper, etc. During their studying, the pupils practically tried many sorts of working. I believe that this way of practicing is the best one to help children choose their way of life and their career.
o sum up, I would like to say that it is crucial to provide pupils and students with professional courses and working practices to help them choose an appropriate job in the future.
Comments:
It's a nice appliction of linking elements and perfect tenses. Next step: try to implement passive and conditional structures.
1. No contraction, it's a formal writing
2. Avoid repetions
3. Sophistication of vocabulary
4. Too many words
help to develop - formal style
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I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best one because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference. Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an entertaining and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications which will attract potential employers. Also, while taking these courses, students can decide whether they are interested in this or that professional area. What is more, a lot of courses help to develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems.However, the courses are usually theoretical studies. So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice. It can be a professional one in a commercial company where they can learn the ropes or some kind of practice in the school or the university. For example, from Vladimir Pozner's autobiography I got to know about the way he had been taught working skills in an American school. In this school every year pupils were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity. For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post office. Other year pupils ran the office supplies shop, some other made and sold pottery and some other were responsible for the school newspaper, etc. During their studying, the pupils practically tried many sorts of working. I believe that this way of practicing is the best one to help children choose their way of life and their career.
o sum up, I would like to say that it is crucial to provide pupils and students with professional courses and working practices to help them choose an appropriate job in the future.
I truly believe that the most important thing children should be taught is trying many kinds of something and then choosing the best one because, generally, the meaning originates from the difference. Thus, schools and universities can help young people choose an entertaining and well-paid job by organizing different kinds of professional studies and working practices.
As far as I can judge, professional courses are very useful because they are providing students with qualifications which will attract potential employers. Also, while taking these courses, students can decide whether they are interested in this or that professional area. What is more, a lot of courses help to develop critical thinking skill, including the ability to analyse and solve problems. However, the courses are usually theoretical studies. So, they cannot teach students the practical skills they will need in the workplace.
Therefore, it is necessary to provide students with working practice. It can be a professional one in a commercial company where they can learn the ropes or some kind of practice in the school or the university. For example, from Vladimir Pozner's autobiography I got to know about the way he had been taught working skills in an American school. In this school every year pupils were in charge of different kinds of school internal activity. For example, 8-year pupils were in charge of the school post office. Other year pupils ran the office supplies shop, some other made and sold pottery and some other were responsible for the school newspaper, etc. During their studying, the pupils practically tried many sorts of working. I believe that this way of practicing is the best one to help children choose their way of life and their career.
o sum up, I would like to say that it is crucial to provide pupils and students with professional courses and working practices to help them choose an appropriate job in the future.